Проверьте пожалуйста сочинение : есть ли там ошибки?

Английский язык | 10 - 11 классы

Проверьте пожалуйста сочинение : есть ли там ошибки?

(прошу обратить внимание на правильность написания глагольных форм, уместности предлогов и артиклей) My future profession doctor

Now I’m in the 10th grade, and soon I will have to choose where to study later.

There are many noble and respected professions in the world, but I want to be a doctor.

In the another city there is a medical university, so I can continue my education there.

I just need to choose the right branch of the numerous branches.

In order to become a qualified physician, I have to study for about 6 years.

After I graduated, I have the right to work in the hospital.

I hope to succeed in the field of medicine, as it is my favorite profession.

I have relatives who work as doctors : everyone has a own specialty.

I see how hard they work to help people and heal them from various diseases.

I understand that we need certain qualities to the profession, such as love for people, responsibility, patience, and an inquisitive mind, etc.

I also need to learn, especially in certain areas, such as biology, chemistry, Latin and even math.

But I’m not afraid of any difficulties, and I am ready to do my best.

I would like to work with people to help them recover, to diagnose certain diseases and assign the appropriate preparations.

My parents support my decision to become a doctor.

They have no doubt that this is the right decision for me.

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Happy22 11 июл. 2021 г., 18:47:57

Ошибок нет я точно все проверила.

Nikita1990 9 февр. 2021 г., 02:17:22 | 1 - 4 классы

ПОЖАЛУЙСТА ПОМОГИТЕ ПРОЧИТАТЬ, , , There is only one long street in a small town?

ПОЖАЛУЙСТА ПОМОГИТЕ ПРОЧИТАТЬ, , , There is only one long street in a small town.

The houses arent tall and the street isnt wide.

But the people arent happy in this town.

There are no trees and flowers in the street.

The little children havent got any place to play.

They are sad and unhappy.

Nobody can help them.

In autumn Miss Chatter comes to visit the town.

She sees the sad children in the snreet / She wants to help them / She says, "Dear children!

Lets grow a nice green garden together!

" Miss Chatter and the children big into the ground, put in the seeds, plant the trees and water the flowers.

The weather becomes cjld and windy.

But they continue to work.

Spring comes and the children play in the garden every day.

They like the green apple trees, the nici flowers and the merry birds.

In spring the days are sunny and warm.

Miss Chatter and the little children fly kites and play hide - and - seek.

The people of the town like to have picnics in the garden.

They say, "Thank you!

" to Miss Chatter and the little children.

Kungur 23 янв. 2021 г., 09:51:34 | 1 - 4 классы

Переведите на русский язык этот текст?

Переведите на русский язык этот текст.

The Green Garden There is only one long street in a small town.

The houses aren't tall and the street isn't wide.

But the people aren't happy in this town.

There are no trees and flowers in the street.

The little children haven't got any place to play.

They are sad and unhappy.

Nobody can help them.

In autumn Miss Chatter comes to visit the town.

She sees the sad children in the street.

She wants to help them.

She says, “Dear children!

Let's grow a nice green garden together!

” Miss Chatter and the children dig the ground, put in the seeds, plant the trees and water the flowers.

The weather becomes cold and windy.

But they continue to work.

Spring comes and the children play in the garden every day.

They like the green apple trees, the nice flowers and the merry birds.

In spring the days are sunny and warm.

Miss Chatter and the little children fly kites and play hide - and - seek.

The people of the town like to have picnics in the garden.

They say, “Thank you!

” to Miss Chatter and the little children.

Now all the people are happy in the town.

Lilinkal 26 мар. 2021 г., 20:48:56 | 5 - 9 классы

Помогите пожалуйста перевести текст?

Помогите пожалуйста перевести текст.

My future profession.

Ma name is Svetlana.

I am the eighth grade.

There are many different professions in the world, but I want to become a doctor.

After finishing school, I am going to enter the medical University.

It seems to me that it's my mission.

I like to help people.

To become a doctor I must be good at studies because a doctor is a noble and responsible profession.

We trust doctors the main thing what we have - our life and that's why a doctor must be a qualified specialist.

He must help people at any time of the day.

A doctor can't make a mistake.

A qualified specialist always makes diagnoses and treats patients correctly.

Human life often depends on the professionalism of doctors.

They must be very helpful and open - hearted people.

A doctor must always worry about the health of his patients.

He must be able to inspire patients with faith.

My mother and grandmother are doctors.

They are proud of their profession and like it.

I consider that a doctor is the best profession in the world.

Линка141 22 июн. 2021 г., 03:36:11 | 5 - 9 классы

Переведите на русский Now I'm in the 11th grade, and soon I will have to choose where to study later?

Переведите на русский Now I'm in the 11th grade, and soon I will have to choose where to study later.

There are many noble and respected professions in the world, but I want to be a doctor.

Вафелька22 4 окт. 2021 г., 20:59:11 | 10 - 11 классы

Нужен хороший перевод?

Нужен хороший перевод!

Без переводчика !

In the USA the young man who has the secondary education must pass through seven or eight years of hard study before he begins his work as a doctor.

First he has three or four years of premedical training at a university.

Here he learns the main sciences.

Only those students who show good results in their premedical training can become candidates for higher medical education.

Those who do not continue their education can work as nurses.

The higher medical education is difficult.

The students must study four years in the medical faculty of the university.

During the first two years the student masters laboratory sciences.

To learn2 the structure of the human body the student studies Anatomy.

The student must get deep knowledge ofbiological chemistry because it is the basis for clinical laboratory diagnosis and therapy.

The student learns the functions of the body theoretically from books and by laboratory experiments in classes of Physiology.

In the USA the curriculum3 of medical faculties, has such a subject as Psychology which teaches the student to deal with patients4 and understand human behaviour (поведение).

The student learns all other theoretical subjects such as Pharmacology and Pathologic Physiology before he begins to treat a patient.

In his third and fourth years the student gets instruction and practical experience in the treatment and care of the patient.

During these years the student has the possibility to work at the hospital and learn much of main medical procedures and different diseases to be well prepared for his work.

Давид11111111234 25 февр. 2021 г., 23:41:50 | 5 - 9 классы

Напишите как читается :Only when all the rivershave run dryAnd all the fish in the sea have diedOnly when all the rainforestshave been burnt downAnd there is no food for animalsOnly when all the blue ?

Напишите как читается :

Only when all the rivers

have run dry

And all the fish in the sea have died

Only when all the rainforests

have been burnt down

And there is no food for animals

Only when all the blue skies

have been filled with smoke

And the cities of the world have choked

Will the white man understand that

It’s too late to save the earth.

Targoi901 27 апр. 2021 г., 21:12:23 | 10 - 11 классы

Choose the words and replace them in the right form?

Choose the words and replace them in the right form.

Olyamakarenkov 30 июл. 2021 г., 19:17:09 | 5 - 9 классы

Вставить пропущенные словаany hopeno moneya lot of helpno worksome moneyno homesome problemsany peopleno peopleA lot of people in the world are very poor and some have ?

Вставить пропущенные слова

any hope

no money

a lot of help

no work

some money

no home

some problems

any people

no people

A lot of people in the world are very poor and some have .

At all.

Sometimes these people had good jobs and then perhaps their business had .

And suddenly they had .

And .

Sometimes they don't have .

For the future, either.

Are there .

Like that in your town?

In some countries these people get .

, there is .

From the government every year to help them.

But in other countries there are .

To help them.

Fizikсабина 12 дек. 2021 г., 03:36:10 | 5 - 9 классы

Work in pairs and discuss your own school?

Work in pairs and discuss your own school.

Mention the following : - its location and building ; - the clubs and activities you have in your school ; - the changes you would like to see there.

Dyf257 11 июл. 2021 г., 11:43:21 | 10 - 11 классы

Перевод?

Перевод.

One hundred and fifty years ago, nurses were unpaid, untrained, and unpopular, but then Florence Nightingale made nursing into a profession.

The methods she introduced in the 1850s were copied all over the world, and now nursing is a career with a three - or four - year training, qualifications, grades, unions, and pensions.

In Britain, every nurse is on a grade.

The grade depends on experience and skills, and each grade has different responsibilities and pay.

On the bottom grades are unqualified auxiliary nurses who do the routine work on hospital wards.

On the top grades are nursing officers, who are usually administrators.

Auxiliary nurses are on the bottom grades, but students nurses get the lowest pay.

However, students don't stay at the bottom of the pay scale forever.

When they qualify, they start working on a middle grade.

As they get experience, they can get promotion and move up the ranks to become staff nurse, then sister (charge nurse if a man), and perhaps eventually nursing officer.

Many nurses work shifts, and often they work overtime to earn more money.

After basic training, many nurses choose to do further study and become specialists.

Nurses can specialize in many different fields - there are triage nurses working in Casualty, and psychiatric nurses who treat the mentally ill.

There are health visitors who visit patients in their own homes, practice nurses working in GPs' surgeries and midwives who deliver babies.

Many of them say they do not get enough pay and respect for the work they do.

They say that the work is physically and mentally hard, that they work long hours and get very tired.

But they also say that there are many great rewards which have nothing to do with money.

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