Проверьте грамотность и предлоги, формулировку сочинения?

Английский язык | 5 - 9 классы

Проверьте грамотность и предлоги, формулировку сочинения!

There are many animals on the world.

But I`d like to tell you about my favourite one.

It is wolf.

I`m really admire for its beauty and grace.

There are many kinds of wolves, which have differents in their appeance, for example in colour.

But I`m like this animals not only by its appearance, I`m wonder for their intelligance and devotion to their pack.

Once, I saw wolves`s hunting on TV.

It was emazing!

I marvel their speed and endurance.

They can silently stalk prey like a shadow.

If someone`ll ask me whether I would like to become in the next life, I`ll have chosen wolf.

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Jibekaesk 2 дек. 2018 г., 02:22:47

В первом предложении in the world.

Не differents, а differences.

Не I'm like, а I like.

И там же I wonder

опечатка intelligence

wolves'

скорее всего нужен артикль "a" тут - a prey

вроде после if нельзя will писать.

Тогда не will ask, а asks, хотя мне кажется вообще это предложение лучше переделать так :

If someone asks me who I would like to become in the next life, I`ll chose a wolf.

Тысячная 12 окт. 2018 г., 21:26:29 | 5 - 9 классы

Помогите это надо перевести?

Помогите это надо перевести!

Grey wolf this is the largest member of the dog family.

It is now found mainly in forests.

They cooperate when they hut, and this allows them to kill animals several times their own size.

They share their food, wolves have a strict order - junior wolves have to wait for larger, older animals.

Karina210203 6 авг. 2018 г., 12:42:00 | 5 - 9 классы

Срочно нужен перевод?

Срочно нужен перевод!

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of keeping animals in zoos On Sunday afternoons in every major city many families go to the zoo with kids.

They always have a lot of fun, see many rare animals, funny monkeys, tall giraffes, huge elephants and cute koalas.

But what is going on with animals?

On the one hand, animals are safe in zoos, which means they cannot be hurt in their cages.

Secondly, animals have enough food, for example, they can always eat in a zoo, while they may be starving in nature.

Furthermore, many poachers kill animals for their skin, fur and meat, but they cannot do it to animals in zoos.

What is more, there are many species that are almost exterminated, but zoos help them reproduce and keep their species existing.

The last but not least, if the natural habitat of some species is destroyed, ruined or is no longer for living in, zoos make cages that look exactly like the natural habitat.

On the other hand, animals are kept away from their natural place of living.

For instance, lions can never live in Berlin.

Another major disadvantage of keeping animals imprisoned is too much noise and stress for them.

Many people come to see them.

For example, kids come near the cages and tease them, so they have a very stressful life unlike their natural way of living.

Not to mention the fact that animals are not free.

They are trapped in their cells like in prisons.

In conclusion, there are many advantages and disadvantages of keeping animals in zoos and everyone is to judge by himself.

However, before that think about yourself being kept in a cage and being seen just as an amusement!

01234567895 25 нояб. 2018 г., 09:46:21 | 5 - 9 классы

Big wild animals live in the city?

Big wild animals live in the city.

They live in the city zoo, where some zoo animals, like the polar bear and penguin, are from cold lands.

Some of them, like the monkey and elephant are from hot lands.

Other animals, like the red fox, are from the forest near the city.

In a good zoo, the animals have a lot of rooms where they can run, climb, and jump.

The zoo animals have got things they like.

Monkeys have got trees where they can play and climb.

Bears have got cool caves where they can stay on very hot days.

The animal cages are like little rooms.

They have doors and the animals can go out.

When it is sunny, an animal can go out, but it can come in when it is cold and rainy.

A good zoo is a nice home for many of the animals.

Zoo animals get nice food at the zoo.

Many people work in the zoo.

They look after the animals.

They give food to the animals.

They clean cages and caves.

People from other places can see wild animals in the zoo.

Many people never go to the lands where the wild animals come from.

And a city zoo brings the wild animals to the people.

ПОМОГИТЕ ПЕРЕВЕСТИ.

Renata996 6 нояб. 2018 г., 15:01:53 | 10 - 11 классы

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Nowadays there are a lot of social proplems and workaholism - is one of them.

Who are they, workaholics?

So many people think about this problem, and all of them have their own opinion.

From my point of view, it is much better way to be an workaholic in modern world.

Of course, there are many positive and negative components, pluses and minuses.

On the one hand, some people are interested in their job and on work they become much happier.

There are a lot of well - known stories, when hard - working person becomes successful, rich and famous.

On the other hand, there are many people who dislike their work, but they become workaholics becouse career forses.

They depend on their job and spend every minute of the day working, do not have time for anyone else, for example for relatives and friends.

It plays a harmful role for organism too : people become more agressive, pessimistic and stressed, relying on coffee and try to keep awake, not enough sleep, eat a poor diet.

The risk of having a heart attack increases significantly, as does a chance to get other health problems such as cancer.

Finally, i can say that so many people, so many minds, but everithing, particulary workaholism, should be in moderation.

People should pay attention not only for work, but on their privat - life too.

KoshkinoGore 12 мар. 2018 г., 21:44:53 | 1 - 4 классы

The Barkers' are in the garden near the house?

The Barkers' are in the garden near the house.

They always come to their garden in spring and summer.

Chase, their dog, and Smokey, their cat, like to play in the gargen.

But now they are not playing.

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Malaya199725 15 апр. 2018 г., 09:53:06 | 5 - 9 классы

Переведите текст на русском языке : Such animals as the tiger, black rhino and giant panda, are now so rare that they are endangered?

Переведите текст на русском языке : Such animals as the tiger, black rhino and giant panda, are now so rare that they are endangered.

Animals are in danger for many reasons, and most of these are to do with humans.

People collect animals as pets, and hund them for food and for 'fun'.

They destroy their habitats.

We must look after the animals we have left, before it is too late.

Ramilyagalimov 9 янв. 2018 г., 04:18:33 | 5 - 9 классы

Напишите пожалуйста как читается на русском Wolves are wild animals?

Напишите пожалуйста как читается на русском Wolves are wild animals.

They look very much like big domestic dogs.

Usually wolves are grey with long fluffy tails, their hair is long and thick.

Wolves are famous for their strong sharp teeth.

They have long enduring legs and big paws.

Wolves can live almost anywhere.

They can be found in tundra, taiga, and steppe.

There are even polar wolves.

Wolves are predators and very smart hunters.

Depending on the habitat they can feed on rodents, hoofed animals, and birds.

In hungry winters wolves often attack livestock and even men.

Wolves have great physical strength, endurance and agility.

Moreover, they hunt in packs that’s why their attacks are extremely successful.

As wolves kill weak and sick animals first they are considered to be forest medics.

But because of the danger they pose to people, many species of wolves have been completely wiped out, and many are considered endangered.

Persipanchik 11 мая 2018 г., 06:24:04 | 5 - 9 классы

ПОМОГИТЕ ПОЖААЛУЙСТА ПЛИИЗ ОЧЕНЬ СРОЧНО НУЖНО ПЕРЕВЕСТИ ЭТОТ ТЕКСТ НА РУССКИЙ И ЧТОБЫ ПЕРЕВОД БЫЛ ПРАВИЛЬНЫЙ И ПОНЯТНЫЙ People have lived on our planet for many years?

ПОМОГИТЕ ПОЖААЛУЙСТА ПЛИИЗ ОЧЕНЬ СРОЧНО НУЖНО ПЕРЕВЕСТИ ЭТОТ ТЕКСТ НА РУССКИЙ И ЧТОБЫ ПЕРЕВОД БЫЛ ПРАВИЛЬНЫЙ И ПОНЯТНЫЙ People have lived on our planet for many years.

They lived and live on different continents, on different countries.

People depend on their planet, on the sun, on animals and plants around them.

Today let's read and speak about some animals on our planet the Earth.

Many animals and birds on the Earth are disappearing.

Many of them are in danger.

Indian tigers and African elephants are among them.

People have hunted and killed many tigers in India and a lot of elephants in Africa.

Why ?

Tigers and elephants are often dangerous animals.

Tigers can kill cows, sheep, other ddomestic animals and sometimes they can also kill man.

Some people are afraid of tigers and kill them to save their domestic animals and their lives.

But some people have often hunted tigers for fun and for their beautiful skin.

They can easily sell the skin and get a lot of money as the prices are high.

The result is very sad.

There are few Indian tigers left on the Earth now.

Many of them are old, sick animals.

Most tigers don't hunt people now adays, but hide from them in deep, dark forests.

Or they rather hid there earlier, because there aren't many forests for tigers nowedays.

People have cut down many trees.

And the question is : "Have those animals got a future?

" We can ask the same question about African elephants.

They are wonderful animals.

They can help man.

In the 19th century Africa was full of elephants.

But these days there are not many of them except in African parks.

This is the sad story of Indian tigers and African elephants.

But many less dangerous wild animals and birds are also disappearing from the Earth.

Modern life is bad for them.

The air is not fresh.

The water is not clean.

They dan't often have good things to eat and space to live.

You can find their names in the Red Book.

You can find the names of some fish there too.

People must take special care of them all.

ЗАРАНЕЕ СПАСИБО.

Никита23222 11 мая 2018 г., 09:41:21 | 5 - 9 классы

КАК ЧИТАЕТСЯ НА АНГЛИЙСКОМ?

КАК ЧИТАЕТСЯ НА АНГЛИЙСКОМ?

I don't think that the British have alway made a proper choice.

To many, fish and chips is the icon fo England which they can't live without.

But i personally have not voted for it.

Why? Because the "chip" is not British.

It is Belgian.

Many people have voted for tea.

But tea is not British, either.

It came from India!

Most British people are crazy about footbal and they have voted for it.

OK, footbal is British.

But I don's like footbal.

Why should I vote for it.

Yui097 28 апр. 2018 г., 12:01:28 | 1 - 4 классы

Grey wolf this is the largest member of the dog family?

Grey wolf this is the largest member of the dog family.

It is now found mainly in forests.

They cooperate when they hut, and this allows them to kill animals several times their own size.

They share their food, wolves have a strict order - junior wolves have to wait for larger, older animals.

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