Таково моё сочинение, но в нём много ошибок, проверьте пожалуйста и исправьте ошибки : It was raining when I, my sister, my father and his friend went on a fishing trip?

Английский язык | 10 - 11 классы

Таково моё сочинение, но в нём много ошибок, проверьте пожалуйста и исправьте ошибки : It was raining when I, my sister, my father and his friend went on a fishing trip.

The day was rainy, cloudy, just for catching fish.

When we arrived at the lake, we saw people who had apparently come to fish too.

We built a fire, got warm, pumped up the boat and went fishing with fishing rods.

We fished for 8 hours.

We talked all the time.

We caught 10 pikes and 5 perches.

This was my first long night fishing.

Everything was fantastic.

At two o'clock in the morning we came back, had a meal and went to bed.

After detting up at five in the morning, WE had breakfast and then went fishing, admiring the sunrise.

We only came back home at five o'clock in the evening.

I will never forget this fishing.

Everything was just great.

I had a good fun and rest.

Оно немного не подходит к плану которое дано : 1)вступление 2)когда, где случилась история, кто участвовал 3)основная часть - абзацы - 2, 3 - события(последовательно и кульминационный момент 4)что произошло в конце, как себя чувствовали (время : past simple?

Past continious).

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Vladdr32 19 июл. 2018 г., 22:15:05

Все верно кроме одногоdetting а должно бытьdating.

Iazaza200 25 мар. 2018 г., 08:36:27 | 5 - 9 классы

Goodbye, summer?

Goodbye, summer!

I think my summer holidays were wonderful this year.

I had a lot of fun.

In June my family and i went to the Black Sea.

We stayed three weeksat a hotel in Sochi.

The weather was hot and sunny, and we went to the beach every day.

We swam a lot and stayed in the sun.

My father taught me to boat, and we often went boating and fishing early in the morning.

In July we came back to Moscow.

My parents began working and I made a trip to St.

Petersburg to visit my grandfather who lives there.

My sister Lena went to Yaroslavl to stay with our cousin Marina.

Lena and I to some interesting places in and near Moscow.

We were in the Kremlin museums, the pushkin Museums and in Archangelskoe.

We were going to go to Vladimir too but couldnt.

The weather was terrible that day, it rained and it was very windy and cold.

In the middle of August Lena and I went to London ti visit the Barkers and we had a wonderful time there.

Now I am back at school and happy to see my friends again.

In simmer I made a lot of pictures.

I am going to send some to London, my friends John Barker.

ПЕРЕВИДИТЕ ПОЖАЛУЙСТА.

2004anna2004 7 нояб. 2018 г., 19:27:41 | 10 - 11 классы

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We went to the (amuse) park and had a great time there!

I enjoyed riding the roller coaster and my little sister played(happy)on the swings while our parents were having their coffee in the summer cafe.

Then we watched a funny(perform) in the Green Theatre.

It was the first family outing we`d had for ages.

MapuHa1 7 нояб. 2018 г., 19:15:21 | 5 - 9 классы

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A woman met me in Lowood school.

She took my things and we walked to a big house.

We went into the house.

A teacher came and took me by the hand.

The woman went away with my things and the teacher took me into a long room with a lot of large tables round it.

Girls of nine to twelve years old sat on benches round the tables.

They all had brown dresses on.

It was dark and cold in the room.

"Sit down on one of the benches, " said the teacher.

"The girls are learning their lessons for tomorrow.

They will soon finish and you will have supper.

Then you will go to bed.

" For supper we had a piece of bread and some water.

After that we marched to the bedroom.

It was a large room with many beds.

Two girls slept in each bed.

In ten minutes the teacher took away the light.

The night passed quickly.

In the morning it was very cold in the room.

We washed our faces in water with ice.

Then we marched to the cold schoolroom where lessons began.

We read the Bible and did exercises in our exercise - books.

This lasted for an hour.

Then we marched to another room for breakfast.

After breakfast there was reading, writing, history and geography.

Before dinner we went into the cold, windy garden for an hour.

- For dinner we had some bad meat and potatoes.

I ate what I could.

Then we marched back to the school - room and had our lessons till five o'clock.

The next day began as before, but we could not wash.

The water in the wash - room was ice.

During January, February and March there was much snow in the garden.

We had no boots and could not walk far.

The rooms were very cold.

The food was bad and in spring many of the pupils were ill with typhus.

In May Lowood school was a hospital.

Forty - five girls out of eighty were ill.

We had no lessons.

Many pupils went home and died there.

Some girls died in the school.

Алексей205 5 мая 2018 г., 08:10:43 | 5 - 9 классы

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И некоторые слова, которые не очень подходят или не похожи на начальный уровень, просьба заменить на более простые и примитивные.

This summer I went to Lake Balkhash.

Weather was very hot and solar.

Water was warm.

I went with the friends.

We bathed and played beach volleyball.

Fried meat in the evening and ate a water - melon.

We were there three days.

But for the third day weather strongly deteriorated.

There was a cold wind and the rain dripped.

To bathe it was cold and we walked on the coast.

At night in the lake the moon was reflected.

It was very beautiful.

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I got to the party early but (2) later / as soon as I arrived I gave him the present and he liked it.

Then some more people came and the party started.

(3) First / Suddenly we had a drink.

(4) Next / During we had tea.

(5) After that / Dun'ng tea I talked to Sue but (6) before / as soon as we started talking her mother phoned.

There was an emergency at home and she went home.

But she came back (7) later / as soon as.

It was a summer evening and we went outside.

(8) First / Suddenly the moon came out and we all looked at the moonlight in the garden.

(9) After that / During we went back in again.

We played some music, talked and danced.

(10) Suddenly / In the end we all went home.

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A. Read The Text And The Sentences after it?

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Which of Them are true?

What Name Can You Give To The Text?

Hi my name is bob, bob wilson.

My holidays began yesterday.

It was a wonderful day.

I was up early in the morning.

The weather was wonderful.

I was happy!

I went to the bathroom and had a shower.

I dressed and went to the kitchen.

My mother gave me breakfast - Some salad, porridge and a ham sandwich.

I drank coffee with milk and was ready for my morning walk with my friends.

We were all free - no school, no classes.

We met at the bus stop at nine and went to the cinema.

There was a good film on and we all wanted to see it.

It was "AGENT colin at the museum".

The film began at 9 : 30.

Film was wonderful.

We all liked it a lot.

After The Film we went to the a cafe near the cinema and had lunch there.

We were all hungry.

We took vegetable pizza, We enjoyed our meal very much.

After lunch we went to the park and had a good time there riding our bikes.

1) Bob was up early.

2) The Weather was nasty.

3) The boy's mother gave him breakfast.

4) Bob had porridge for breakfast.

5) Bob had breakfast with his friends.

6) Bob and his friends met at the cinema.

7) The friends walked to the cinema.

8) After The film the friends were hungry.

9) They had lunch at a cafe.

10) After lunch they went home.

B. Correct the false sentences.

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Monday the 10th day of my holiday August and it was fantastic!

I left home at 7 : 00 and arrived at Heathrow Yesterday was the airport at 9 : 30.

I had Breakfast in the restaurant at the airport, flight to Orlando for a very long time.

But there was plenty to do.

I saw two films : one Western, the other was a Comedy.

I also slept a lot of the time.

In fact, when we arrived in Orlando, I don't feel tired at all.

Ted met me at the airport and we went to his house, where we swam in his pool and drank and played tennis.

Then we ate hamburgers milkshakes.

In the afternoon we went to the ranch.

And I went on a horse for the first time.

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Переведи текст : Nobody talked much?

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We saved most of the birds and animals from the house, but all the cows were gone.

Dad had to borrow money from the bank, and we were hard for a long time.

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Помогите пожалуйста?

Помогите пожалуйста.

Choose the right answer.

1. While my friend (fished, had fished, was fishing), I was watching the birds.

2. When we got up the sun (already rose, had already risen, has already risen).

3. When we entered the hall the music (was playing, played, had played) loudly.

4. I (had come, was coming, came) home early yesterday.

5. They (go dancing, are going dancing, went dancing) regularly.

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