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Computers in Our Life.

I would like to talk about what is the role of computers in our lives.

These machines appeared quite a long time ago, in the middle of the last century.

Initially, computers were huge, enormous machines, but over time, their size decreased and the quality has improved.

People have invented for themselves indispensable helpers in the work, socializing with friends and in their own entertainment.

Computers help to make a person’s shopping list, remind someone of important appointments and anniversaries and answer the telephone.

We can`t imagine our life without computers.

Many people get used to such effect and can no longer get rid of it.

So there is a dependence on computers and computer games.

Of course, this is bad, because this effect destroys the man, his health and life.

In the end, he can go crazy as computer addiction similar to drug addiction, from which it is very difficult to recover.

Thus, I believe that people should be able to control their actions and not let the "iron robots" to subordinate themselves and thereby to ruin their future.

I believe that we should not zloupotrebliati the benefits that people give computers, otherwise it will be too much, and modern technology will absorb people.

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BuGan 28 нояб. 2018 г., 05:38:44

I would like to talk about the role that computers play in our lives.

These machines appeared quite a long time ago -

in the middle of the last century.

Initially, computers were huge,

enormous machines, but over time, their size has decreased and their quality has improved.

People have invented for themselves indispensable helpers

in their work, socializing with friends, and entertaining themselves.

Computers help us make our shopping lists, remind us about

important appointments and anniversaries, help us answer the telephone.

We

can`t imagine our lives without computers.

Many people have got used to

such state of things and they can no longer do without computers.

So now we can see a kind of dependence on

computers and computer games.

Of course, this is bad, because it destroys people, ruins their health and lives.

As the result they can end up going

crazy because computer addiction is akin to drug addiction, very difficult to recover from.

Thus, I believe that we should be

able to control their actions and not to make ourselves slaves of "iron robots" letting them ruin our future.

I believe that

we should not overuse the benefits provided to us by computers.

Otherwise modern technology will devour us.

Pro100karina93 1 сент. 2018 г., 21:15:00 | 5 - 9 классы

Проверьте пожалуйста, все ли правильно?

Проверьте пожалуйста, все ли правильно.

Many people think that robots will replace people in the future .

It is true that technology plays a big part in our life.

- Robots better than people do all the work.

- We will be able to save our time and energy.

However there are some cons drawbacks is using robots.

- Robots can never replace people, because the robots just a piece of iron and people have the ability to think and decide for yourself.

- There are things that can be done only peopl, for example invest in their work of love.

Dolphin2002 22 дек. 2018 г., 04:02:25 | 1 - 4 классы

Как читается текст по английски They say men and women will wear the same clothes but in different colours?

Как читается текст по английски They say men and women will wear the same clothes but in different colours.

Pupils will not go to school.

They will have computers at home and the computers will help them to learn everything.

At weekends people will go to the moon and other planets.

They will have a good time there.

They won't read many books.

They will mostly watch television and get news from computer networks.

And they will learn many things from nature.

All people will enjoy their life.

Natja 9 июн. 2018 г., 00:30:35 | 5 - 9 классы

Помогите перевести текст пожалуйста?

Помогите перевести текст пожалуйста!

People will be taller and cleverer.

Some people think that men will be two metres tall, and women will be as tall as men.

They say men and women will wear the same clothes but in different colours.

Pupils won`t go to school.

They will have computers and computers will be their teachers.

Lazar111 19 сент. 2018 г., 05:04:06 | 10 - 11 классы

Some people think that technology will save the world and make it better, some others think that technology will ruin the society because we are too dependent on electric and electronic gadgets and ma?

Some people think that technology will save the world and make it better, some others think that technology will ruin the society because we are too dependent on electric and electronic gadgets and machines.

Эссе С2.

Kurganovaa9999 31 авг. 2018 г., 21:35:44 | 5 - 9 классы

Напишите пожалуйста как будет читаться текст It's difficult to overestimate the role of science and technology in our life?

Напишите пожалуйста как будет читаться текст It's difficult to overestimate the role of science and technology in our life.

They accelerate the development of civilization and help us in our co - operation with nature.

Scientists investigate the laws of the universe, discover the secrets of nature, and apply their knowledge in practice improving the life of people.

Let's compare our life nowadays with the life of people at the beginning of the 20th century.

It has changed beyond recognition.

Our ancestors hadn't the slightest idea of the trivial things created by the scientific progress that we use in our every day life.

I mean refrigerators, TV sets, computers, microwave ovens, radio telephones, what not.

They would seem miracles to them that made our life easy, comfortable and pleasant.

On the other hand, the great inventions of the beginning of the 20th century, I mean radio, airplanes, combustion and jet engines have become usual things and we can't imagine our life without them.

A century is a long period for scientific and technological progress, as it's rather rapid.

Millions of investigations the endless number of outstanding discoveries have been made.

Our century has had several names that were connected with a certain era in science and technology.

At first it was called the atomic age due to the discovery of the splitting of the atom.

Then it became the age of the conquest of space when for the first time in the history of mankind a man overcame the gravity and entered the Universe.

And now we live in the information era when the computer network embraces the globe and connects not only the countries and space stations but a lot of people all over the world.

All these things prove the power and the greatest progressive role of science in our life.

But every medal has its reverse.

And the rapid scientific progress has aroused a number of problems that are a matter of our great concern.

These are ecological problems, the safety of nuclear power stations, the nuclear war threat, and the responsibility of a scientist.

But still we are grateful to the outstanding men of the past and the present who have courage and patience to disclose the secrets of the Universe.

Madinasurapova 21 окт. 2018 г., 06:43:12 | 5 - 9 классы

People depend on computers so much that they sometimes think the machines are giant brains?

People depend on computers so much that they sometimes think the machines are giant brains.

But there is another point of view.

Some people say : "Compared to people, computers aren't at all smart.

Computers are machines that will do only what they are told to do.

" Which point of view do you share and why?

Вэроныка 2 нояб. 2018 г., 19:23:20 | 10 - 11 классы

Эссе на тему : Some educators argue that every child in every school has access to computers?

Эссе на тему : Some educators argue that every child in every school has access to computers.

Others believe that computers in the classroom he is overrated and that computers may actually interfere with the learning process.

What point of view do you agree?

Why? How important are computers in the classroom?

What are the advantages and disadvantages of having in schools?

Kristinaz2512 21 июн. 2018 г., 04:26:56 | 10 - 11 классы

ВИБЕРІТЬ ІЗ ТЕКСТУ 15 - 20 САМИХ ОСНОВНИХ РЕЧЕНЬ?

ВИБЕРІТЬ ІЗ ТЕКСТУ 15 - 20 САМИХ ОСНОВНИХ РЕЧЕНЬ!

Computers have had a great impact on society.

Today computers are constantly becoming a part of everyday life.

Computers are used in eve­rything from the home PC or laptop to appliances such as microwaves and even our cars.

Not only have computers had a great impact on our everyday life, but also on education and the workplace.

Computers are used in our ap­pliances, mobile phones, entertainment devices (such as DVD players) and others.

It is almost impossible to get through one day without having some form of interaction with computers.

The Internet has had a huge impact on society.

It provides information and services, as well as the ability to communicate people all around the world in variety of ways.

These range from bulletin boards and chat rooms to voice conversations and video conferencing.

Around the world, the Internet is available to millions of people.

Those who don’t have computer or access to the Internet at home will often have access at work or school, or even at the local library.

Another added bonus of the Internet is that the majority of the information and services avail­able are free.

The use of computers for educational purposes has been highly benefi­cial for those involved.

From a primary school level, children are taught the basics of computer use, including the Internet.

At high school, this continues as children become more and more proficient in using the com­puter.

It is a tertiary level though, that computers really come into use.

News, assignments, tests, lecture notes etc.

Can be placed on the Internet for stu - dents who live in remote areas and cannot travel to and from university or other tertiary institution each day.

The idea of remote learning can also be applied to a primary school level.

Computers impact every part of our lives.

From the home, to the work­place and in education, computers aid us to do what we want.

In general, computers are beneficial to the tasks they are applied to.

Although com­puters can cause some problems, such as unemployment and computer vi­ruses, these are far outweighed by the benefits computers provide.

Because of this, computers and technology will continue to have an increasing effect on society.

Lisk209 22 апр. 2018 г., 06:19:17 | 1 - 4 классы

Помогите перевести текст?

Помогите перевести текст!

Some people think that the world will change a lot.

The cities will become bigger.

They will be more beautiful.

There will be more parks and trees in them.

Some people say that there won't be many people in the cities and the cities will become smaller but there will be more farms.

More people will live in the country, and they will grow food for all the world.

People will be taller and more clever.

Some people think that men will be two metres tall, and women will be as tall as men.

They say men and women will wear the same clothes but in different colours.

Pupils will not go to school.

They will have computers at home and the computers will help them to learn everything.

At weekends people will go to the moon and other planets.

They will have a good time there.

They won't read many books.

They will mostly watch television and get news from computer networks.

And they will learn many things from nature.

All people will enjoy their life.

Ketchyp13 28 окт. 2018 г., 05:50:29 | 5 - 9 классы

Переведите пожалуйста ↓↓↓ The scientific and technical revolution has changed our life very much?

Переведите пожалуйста ↓↓↓ The scientific and technical revolution has changed our life very much.

The computers, the mobile phones and other digital devices have entered our everyday life.

The atomic, space and energy age was followed by the age of computers.

The tasks which had seemed eternal before have been solved one by one by computers.

During the last decade many fundamental changes occurred because of electronic devices.

It is even difficult to imagine the social and economic consequences of the microelectronic revolution.

The large use of computers has influenced our life in such a way that it was difficult to imagine 15 or 20 years ago.

On the one hand, computers have simplified our life greatly.

If you typed a text on the typewriter and made a mistake you had to type the whole page again.

Making several copies of the same document used to be a difficult job too.

But now it‘s quite different.

Correcting mistakes is easy.

Computer also helps us to buy goods, find information, book tickets, make presentations and annual reports, and make difficult calculations.

Time is saved for leisure.

Leisure time is also influenced by computer and other periphery devices.

You no longer go to the music shops – many things are available on the internet.

You needn‘t write letters to your relatives or friends – you can send an e - mail.

And your photo albums are on computer too.

Computer games are probably also a part of your free time.

They became more and more realistic and complicated, and for many people it becomes impossible to tear themselves away.

This means that electronic devices, such as computer and TV set are used mostly for entertainment and consume most of the time that could be spent on work, going for a walk and sleeping.

Man becomes a slave of devices which were designed to make him stronger.

Is there a way out?

In fact, there is, but many people don`t know it and are still slaves.

The best decision is not to give these equipments place in your heart.

They should do their work.

And when you have a rest, prefer real communication to virtual one and living an active life to watching films about crime.

Then electronics will be not our lord or enemy but our friend!

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