Найдите, пожалуйста, ошибки в сочинении : Mike was working as assistant during summer vacation, and found pretty girl named Jennifer at the store?

Английский язык | 5 - 9 классы

Найдите, пожалуйста, ошибки в сочинении : Mike was working as assistant during summer vacation, and found pretty girl named Jennifer at the store.

He was shy but he finally asked her out.

He was so happy and excited about it.

On the dating day, he was kind of late because of the traffic jam.

He backed to his home and changed his clothes.

When he was trying to take a bus, he noticed that he has left his money at home!

He backed to his home again, but his parent was out and his house key was in the house!

He climbed the tree and got his money and run to the bus station.

Suddenly police car stopped at him and tried to take him to the police station.

He explained that he lived that house again and again.

He was so late and Jennifer wasn’t there.

She was so angry.

He called her over and over, and wrote a letter that said “Can we begin again?

Please?

” She wasn’t angry any more.

They have dinner together.

This book was cute.

I like love story!

It’s really fun to read.

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Okonoh 15 июл. 2018 г., 09:07:11

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Mike worked as (shop?

) assistant during his summer vacation, and he

found a pretty girl named Jennifer on the store.

He was shy at first but he

finally asked her out.

He was very happy and excited about it.

On the day of

their date, he was a bit late because of traffic jams.

He had come home and

changed his clothes.

When he was trying to take a bus, he noticed that he had

left his money at home!

He went back home again, but his parents were out and

his house key was inside the house!

He climbed the tree and got his money and then

ran to the bus station.

Suddenly, a police car stopped near him and the

policemen tried to take him to the police station.

He explained that he lived in

that house again and again.

He was very late and Jennifer wasn’t there.

She was

very angry.

He phoned her over and over again, and then he wrote a letter that

said “Can we start anew?

Please!

” But she wasn’t angry any more.

They had

dinner together.

This book is very cute.

I like love stories!

They are really

fun to read.

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The Art Theatre.

. his way home Peter Below went.

The theatre box - office and bought two tickets.

The performance.

It was already four o'clock.

The afternoon.

Half an hour he came home.

Peter had dinner.

His family and.

Six o'clock he and his wife were ready to go.

The theatre They came there just.

Time.

The performance.

The performance was wonderful.

They liked it very much.

The theatre Peter and his wife met some.

Their friends and spoke .

Them.

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. half .

Ten the performance was over.

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They walked home.

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He felt sick and giddy.

He had a headache and a sore throat.

It was clear that he needed the services of a doctor .

His mother phoned the policlinics.

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She also took his temperature.

It was.

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She said that it was flu.

The waist doctor wrote a prescription for some pills and mixture and some tablets for his headache.

She asked him to take a tablespoonful of it there times day.

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He sat on it in the water and waited.

A big wave arrived and Nick started to swim strongly.

Nick caught the wave well and stood up on his board.

The people on the beach watched — it was exciting to watch.

Suddenly Nick heard a noise.

A surfboard hit his right arm.

He fell from him board.

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Many years ago, there lived a king in England.

His name was Richard Coeur de Lion.

Coeur de Lion is French.

It means lion - hearted.

It is strange that an English king had a French name.

More than a hundred years before this king, a French duke named William came to England.

He defeated the English, and became the king of England.

He took many Frenchmen or Normans with him.

These Normans were all poor but very proud.

They came with William to help him fight.

He promised to give them money and lands.

So Duke William stole lands, houses and money from the Saxon nobles and gave them to the Normans.

The Saxon nobles became the servants of the proud Normans.

So, there were two races in England.

Each spoke their own language.

Each hated the other.

When Richard became king there was still a great hatred between the two races.

Richard Coeur de Lion was a brave and noble man.

He loved brave men and noble deeds.

He hated all mean and cruel, and the cowards who did them.

He was ready to help the weak.

Richard himself was not gentle.

He was very angry and terrible in battle.

He loved to fight with people who were stronger or better armed than himself and never hurt the weak.

But Richard did not stay in England.

Far over the seas there is a country of Palestine.

Christian people in all ages think gratefully of that country.

But at that time it was in the hands of the enemies.

So Christian people gathered big armies of brave men from every country and sent them to try to win it back.

Brave King Richard too fought for this city.

So he gathered as much money and brave men as he could, and set out for the Holy Land.

Before he went away he called two bishops.

He thought they were good and wise men, and said to them : ‘Take care of England while I am away.

Rule my people wisely and well, and I will reward you when I return.

’ The bishops promised to do as he asked.

King Richard had a brother.

His name was Prince John.

He was different from King Richard in every way.

He was not at all a nice man.

He was jealous of Richard because he was king.

He was angry because he wanted to rule while Richard was away.

John said to the bishops, ‘You must let me rule while the king is away.

’ And the bishops let him to do so.

Deep down in his wicked heart John meant to make himself king and never let Richard come back any more.

A sad time began for the Saxons.

John tried to please the Normans.

He hoped they could help to make him king.

He gave them land and money.

He took it from the Saxons and gave it to the Normans.

Many of the Saxons became homeless.

They lived a wild life in the forests.

One of the few Saxon nobles was Robert, Earl of Huntingdon.

He had one son.

His name was Robert too, but people called him Robin.

He was a favourite with everyone.

He was tall, strong, handsome, and full of fun.

He was brave and fear - less too.

He was the best archer in all the countryside.

He never hurt the weak and poor.

Robert of Huntingdon had a bitter enemy.

One day this enemy came with many soldiers to kill the earl and take all his goods and lands.

There was a terrible fight.

In the end, Robert and all his men were killed.

His house was burned and all his money stolen.

Only Robin was saved.

He was the best archer and no soldier could go near him.

He fought bravely till the last.

But when he saw that his father was dead and his home in flames, he didn’t fight any longer.

He took his bow and arrows and went to the forest of SherwoodPrince John’s men were close behind him.

On and on he went, deeper and deeper into the trees.

At last he sat under a great tree.

His heart was full of anger and thoughts of revenge.

Cruel men in one day took everything.

His father, his home, servants, land, money and his name.

Robin loved the forest.

Soon it comforted him.

At last the tears came hot and fast, and sobs shook him.

The bitterness and anger went out of his heart ; only unhappiness was there.

In the evening Robin said his prayers and swore an oath.

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Androcles wanted to save his life in the forest.

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Nobody else was seen near him.

Androcles became afraid but understood that the lion couldn't do him any harm.

The lion was breathing hard.

He wanted to show Androcles that something was wrong with his paw.

The lion couldn't speak the language of people but he wanted to say : "Save me!

Protect me!

Help me!

" Androcles looked at the lion's paw and discovered a large thorn in it.

It was hidden deep in the paw.

Androcles took it away.

The lion was happy.

They became friends and the lion brought him food every day.

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They brought them to Rome and separated them.

They didn't give any food to the lion.

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He didn't kill Androcles.

He was happy to see his friend.

The Emperor couldn't understand it.

Androcles was brought to him and he told the Emperor gave food to the lion and let them both go away.

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The waves were very big but Nick was a strong swimmer and his new board was good.

He sat on it in the water and waited.

A big wave arrived and Nick started to swim strongly.

Nick caught the wave well and stood up on his board.

The people on the beach watched — it was exciting to watch.

Suddenly Nick heard a noise.

A surfboard hit his right arm.

He fell from his board.

A second big wave hit him and he saw Brian’s board coming at him.

His head went under the water.

The water was in his mouth.

His arm was hurt.

He started to swim but it was not easy.

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The waves were very big but Nick was a strong swimmer and his new board was good.

He sat on it in the water and waited.

A big wave arrived and Nick started to swim strongly.

Nick caught the wave well and stood up on his board.

The people on the beach watched — it was exciting to watch.

Suddenly Nick heard a noise.

A surfboard hit his right arm.

He fell from his board.

A second big wave hit him and he saw Brian’s board coming at him.

His head went under the water.

The water was in his mouth.

His arm was hurt.

He started to swim but it was not easy.

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Complete the sentences?

Complete the sentences.

Use the words and word combinations from Exercise 2.

1) When Paul’s team lost the final, they felt … .

2) When Harry asked Rose to be his wife, it was the happiest moment of her life and she was … .

3) When my brother understood he was also going on a trip, he felt … .

4) When Barbara heard the happy news, she felt … .

5) When the scientist understood that his experiment was not a success, he became … .

6) Andrew was not allowed to work on the PC and he was … .

7) Greg was made to wash up and he was … .

8) When Sally saw herself on the TV screen, she was … .

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